There stretches a path through the woods
Winding through streams and mounds
Safety and lamps light the dark way
While sage company lightens the day
‘Stick to the good path’, you’ll hear them say
‘For the knowledge of our fathers won’t lead you astray'
But the dark forest leans out and beckons to me
With all its glory and mystery
The unknown wilderness call out to me
Promising challenges and destiny
A world where light would lurk among shadows
Tricking and taunting in a deceptive dance
Secrets and danger hanging heavy in the air
Swirling mist fogging all sight
Every step forward a wary gamble
A slash through doubt and challenge
The trampled moss underneath my feet
Traces of a new path for time to follow
4 comments:
why does this remind me so much of my state of mind? ure a genius...i bow down to ur mastery....really.
uve managed wat i cudnt...puttin it in words..thanks i say
Mind blowin, babe!! N u dumb ass, thot i wudn like them huh.. Jus sooooo beautiful, this was my favourite of dem all.. very "art"-ily done up.. pituresque as usual.. sesh ur da best!!!
hey, it's just like physics class! you keep trying to find out new stuff, and go into the realms of darkness - that's like the stuff you don't know, and the wise old physics teacher, bhuvana, tells you to stick to the path (because she's scared of the dark) :)
hey, sorry about the rotten comparison, but i couldn't resist!
it's a really good one, man!
i think i agree with anonymous here... can you draw a picture of the path? i want to see it through your eyes... and i love the path through the path :-)
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